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WALT write a persuasive writing of why sports is important in the world.

I believe some people say that sports are the best thing in the world.

Firstly I believe that sports in the best because it can make you fit and strong for any kind of thing like football,soccer,rugby league,Bat down and cricket. Do you want to be fat,weak, unhealthy at home and start playing on games? you need to get out of the game and start playing some sports. Do you really want to have an unhealthy? no

Another reason why sports are best is because you can try your best like when you come back stronger and fitter than last time. Do want to be slow when there is an emergency? never

Lastly I believe that sports are the best because it can make us fitter and run very faster how you are now. For example I use to be very slow at running in cross country and came last.

In summary I believe that sports are the best in the world because it can make you stronger fitter faster and more blood inside, you can have lots of energy. Added to this. It is extremely fun.